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Reality or Dream
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 02:25:06 PM in AEST
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I long to be loved
I Long to loveback
I want happiness
I wish it back
Cant it be for all?
I cant answer, but hope
Its not for all, but one can wish
Will love find all
Or give up when doesnt feel?,.....Right
One is lost for answers
SIGHS
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brew
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 02:34:09 PM AEST
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I hear ya.
Very good questions and thoughts.
huggs, happy, happy, holidays,
emy |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by CrystalWinters on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 02:19:18 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel, good write |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 12:00:41 PM AEST
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Very nice..
Mery Christmas & A Happy New Year!!
My Friend In Poetry.
honey56 |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 01:43:33 PM AEST
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Questions we often ask arent they. Lovely write. Hoping you find your answers.
Michelle |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 01:48:31 PM AEST
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| i liked the poem, but this poem could make a grown woman cry without a problem. |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:12:14 AM AEST
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sweetie .. sometimes people get lucky and it happens quick and early .. others,
(like myself) have to wait a bit in order to feel that glorious bliss that comes
in sharing a true and deep love for one another. But it WILL happen, hun. Never
give up hoping and searching. The answers you seek will be found. :)
Hope your Holidays were splendid!
miss you girl. *hugs and hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Reality or Dream
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by enigma on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 02:32:34 AM AEST
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brew,
Heavy...oh, so heavy. Even those who we think have found it, more often than not, have not. I wrote a song; I think I posted it a long time ago...It's So Sad. I've walked the streets of New York City; I've stood gazing at the Golden Gate; so many people, thinking that they're making love when what they're doing is acting out their hatred of life; it's going down like a double-edged knife, and it hurts so bad; it's so sad; it's just so damn sad.
There have been three women in my life; I thought each time I had found Love, but I hadn't. The pressures have made me stupidly addicted to nicotine! In my journal I have jokingly kidded myself that where I am today, cigarettes are my new wife, my life-long companion, my loving spouse, a entity in my life I can depend on to be there anytime, day or night, always patiently waiting and instantly responsive. Then I take it one step further and smile: Like all the Loves of my life, even she will turn on me in the end!
I can relate big-time to that last word: SIGHS.
People try to be compassionate and sympathetic. They say, cast your bread upon the water, or let the butterfly go and it will return in full measure. All I can say is, time is slip, slip, slipping away and all I have to show for it is soggy bread and empty palms!
You did a superb job using a minimal amount of language to paint a universal landscape.
You are not alone in your wondering.
ron...enigma |
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