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Contributed by
apartment213
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Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i've got mothers intuition and my own backbone
with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this all backs up will u feed urself
u've washed ur hands and i know
these half smiles are my way of saying goodbye
and i know ur the first when no one's on my side
yes and i know, ur the last to say goodnight
these words are waking and between each hour
dark sentimental u say u dig my gifts ah yes
when this breaks down keep me in ur mind
keep it covered no one kills stories like these
i've got mothers intuition and my own backbone
with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this day backs up will u feed urself
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 09:42:10 AM AEST
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| This is great.!! I love every verse...Its such a sad and unbreathing chorus of moments....to feel this way.and you have expressed yourself well. |
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:41:43 AM AEST
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| i can hear this playing... beautifully sad... |
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:39:29 AM AEST
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tell her how you feel :O) and good luck kenny
i love it! as always
Lindsey |
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:14:29 AM AEST
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| this one left me speechless, but i promised i would comment. i loved the work. so thought provoking. |
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