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The End?
Contributed by
SwEeT_aLeX
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When You miss someone,
Your heart starts to melt,
because you know there's a feeling there, that you've never felt.
His cute smile,
starts to fade away,
and then you wonder why he didn't he stay?
then you realize,
that you miss him so,
You think to yourself, why did i let go?
You wish on every little star,
wishing to see him again,
but then you wake up,and realize,
he can only be your friend.
So you try to forget him,
and all that you've been through,
You ask yourself "what's going on?"
Does he miss me too?
Time passes you by,
You both choose a different track,
and you are left still wondering,
Why didn't he come back?
Copyright ©
SwEeT_aLeX
... [
2003-03-08 06:00:00]
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Re: The End?
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by ktbugg on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:59:29 AM AEST
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| nice poem... i understand where you're coming from... keep it up, the poem's good |
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Re: The End?
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by Eloise on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 07:04:50 AM AEST
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| hey, you left me a comment so i thought id come check out yours,.... this is a good write... it has such a powerful ending |
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Re: The End?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:44:58 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.... nice write....can be so true....
Jenni |
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Re: The End?
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by Asatru on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 02:24:42 AM AEST
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| hey, you told me to read one of your poems and here I am. Something I don't get about this comment section is whether I'm suppossed to say nice poem or help with the pain. So I guess I'll try both. The poem was a good one, one writin with heart. It's crappy that he didn't come back, but do you really need him now? I mean, this poem is of the past, the past is gone. One day it won't hurt, why not make that be today? |
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