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Don't Leave Me In The Storm

Contributed by candysears on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 04:40:49 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Everyday I awake its like a fresh
New beginning

For I could have been sleeping
Between the walls of darkness

All thou there once was a time
I thought I would have been
Content..

But

I gave God all his praise and glory

For he open my eyes to see all
His beauty,

And brought forth a beautiful new
Day

He reform my heart to a better me..

When I wanted to say just let me
Be..

Away from all the cold cruel

Hearted people...

Only looking for

A way to rob, cheat and kill

Taking

Your Shining beacon of light

But in the end..

They will meet their redemption

“Rather its good are Maybe Bad”

They weaken my spirit but not my
Soul..

I some time ask

Why I didn't I have a mansion?

But than I thought

I ask God for a cute little
House..

So am sorry father, you granted
My want and need without a
Delay..

Than I complain maybe I needed
Some of this and maybe some of
That..

I fell to see you gave me a mountain
As everyone could see..

Than

I thought, well Lord why is that?
Everyone have someone to love
Except me..

And

He did respond and told me this

Your husband was tired he needed
Some rest..

And

It was time for him to spread his
Wings..

But, you have me unconditionally
And your husband too..

For now and eternity..

We will both walk alone side
You..

I still complain, “I am so cold Lord"
Whats a body to do?

Than he gave me his wings to warm
My soul

"And said"

You see, am here for you I want
Leave you alone..

I still complain from the everyday
Tribulation..

He only smiled and said

“I’ve got your back..

Just have a bit of faith

I want leave you to fight this
Old turbulent storm..

Copyright Â© candysears ... [ 2007-12-21 04:40:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't Leave Me In The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 07:38:19 AM AEST
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It's a really fresh and enchanting write here, your style is very easy and charming to read.

Good luck

Steve

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