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Look What We've Done

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 01:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




It will never be the same
The truth shall always be known
Underneath all the layers
Deep down to sinewed muscle and bone

No matter what happens
It will not go away
It lingers and corrodes
No matter what they say

Knowing that it is unhealthy
To live within your grip
This love is becoming something else
Definitely a "long strange trip"

If this falls all apart
And dust we do become
Then all I can say baby
Is look what we've done


12-17-07
Laura Howell Horner




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Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 04:45:13 AM AEST
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This is chilling, like walking down a road covered with snow drifts sis.. I hope that you are ok..

I love your poems because they are so "real" constructed from your soul.

Iv been worried bout you.

Hugssss
Michelle


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 06:16:00 AM AEST
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i can't believe that you felt this way. i used to feel this way once when i thought everyone was right about my relationship.
but it turns out that everything will be ok.


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 02:33:35 PM AEST
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My sweet miss.........Laura......Im sorry but member, dont settle for anything,.....NO MATTER.....I can realte with my mom........Your too precious and so are others in the picture. Your a good person.....K..I will call you, hope all is ok.......


Hugs and loves yas

brew~


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 12:52:04 AM AEST
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strong and deep poetry Laura. Remember the good stuff goes to the core as well - it's just harder to hold on to.

S.


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by mr_alleycat on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 04:40:10 PM AEST
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I like how this piece fits other than relationships.
Good write!

mr_alleycat


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 25th December 2007 @ 05:41:40 PM AEST
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There comes a point where all you can do is rebuild, and you can, you must. Be strong, because strength is in you.
Take care,
David


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 09:23:47 AM AEST
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beautifully sad, very moving as all hearts are touched...

love n' hugs nessa


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th December 2007 @ 09:14:59 AM AEST
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Sweets, this is desperately deep and vividly real. Sometimes it is so
hard to continue to patch wounds, especially ones we didn't even notice
were there, but hope and strength are there for you. You have an
honesty and beauty of heart that is necessary to move into that
strangeness that is tomorrow. The unknown. All we can do is hope
that it is all it promises to be. All we want it to be. All we need it to
be...

Sorry I've been so busy lately. Now that the craziness of retail
has a slower pace, I'll be able to come back more frequently. :)
[After I move to the new place :) ]

love this hun. And love you.

hugs and best wishes for the New Year. Great things are in store for you

~MG


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 05:38:58 PM AEST
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hope this isn't what it sound's like again my sister laura, hoping for the best for you always
here's to a most heart warming new years to you and your family . . .



your brother Ben (((((peace and good tiddings )))))))


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 05:23:59 AM AEST
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Well penned,Laura.
Once the corrosion takes a hold,the shine is lost forever.
And nothing left say,except-
"Look what we have done"
How cuttingly true that is.

Den


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 01:52:49 AM AEST
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Hi Laura,

This is a very poigant poem....it gets right to the guts of the matter. It really struck me as a heart felt expression of how stiffling it is to be in a relationship that is controlling and domeneering. There is often permission to be your own person. These are very toxic relationships.

At least that's how the poem struck me, a powerfufl write, my friend

Will


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 11:06:10 PM AEST
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Nicely done, Laura. Love the ending. Gee, its hard to let go of pain. If you figure out how to, please advise...

S.


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 10:54:17 PM AEST
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Well written by a gifted poet, but the content tells me all is still not well, all i can say my sister laura is maybey it's time for the alternitive, sorry for your pain, wish joan i could've been more help . . . take care

peace 2u my sister Laura . . .


Your brother Ben




Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:55:14 PM AEST
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I can relate.
Very sad but life goes on.
Great writing as usual.
So ok sister, you've been in hiuding too long. Where are you?
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: Look What We've Done (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 12:37:51 PM AEST
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"The truth shall always be known"~you

But, pleeeeease don't forget that, "truth",
is also an evolving entity that w/ our better
understanding can grow untill the greater
scope it provides can give us ease in place
of pain for our knowledge of it... having been
blessed w/ the gift of expriencing this I feel
qualified in reassuring you that it is not only
possible but realistically obtainable. You can't
force yourself to it, but you must open yourself to it.
Pleeeease Believe!

& as to the other 15 lines of your write, teehee.
The flow came effortlessly to me
as it was well written & I absolutely love
the shared partnering of responsiblity in
your title...it speaks to awareness if not
happiness...

BIGLOVEMUCHPEACE
~misfitme




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