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And It Wasn't Him
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 08:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I was lost inside
I couldn't find my way
Oh how I tried to break free
From my mind's prison
I was trapped in depression
Couldn't see anything good
I was crying, oh how I was dying
Inside I felt so gone
Nothing was ever right
No one seemed to tell
Force a smile, Fake a laugh
How easily they are fooled
They couldn't see that all I wanted
Was someone to notice
To help, to care
I know it was my fault
I should have made it easier
I should have asked for help
But now I see who really cares
And it wasn't him
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2007-12-20 08:06:13]
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Re: And It Wasn't Him
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by AnenaLynne on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 01:04:28 PM AEST
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wow, very heartfelt...really enjoyed the last 2 lines and how it brought everything together. loved it!
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Re: And It Wasn't Him
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by swedishheatherblue on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 07:55:04 AM AEST
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| Love this one. How many times have I been there. Well I imagine that we all have. |
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