|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A Visit from an Angel
Contributed by
ki
on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 01:54:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
I heard an angel sing to me
And looked up to the sky
I saw she had a broken wing
And that she couldn't fly
So i reached out a hand to her
She put her hand in mine
I smiled when i saw her face
And knew she'd be just fine
I held her tight against my chest
As she whispered in my ear
Saying "Please mommy don't be afraid,
Your baby girl is here"
I waited for a single breath
Between all of my tears
A look into that gorgeous face
Was like looking in the mirror
I brushed my hand against her cheek
She did the same to me
"Don't worry mom,Heaven is great
They even have T.V,
I have all that i could ever want
But nothing that i need
Im sorry i left u and dad
It was my destiny"
Then my angel stood in front of me
And kissed me on the cheek
Blown away by all her beauty
So very special and unique
She never really said good-bye
But i knew she had to leave
I never saw her after that
My angel,rest in peace
Copyright ©
ki
... [
2007-12-20 01:54:33]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Visit from an Angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by conorshawn on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 02:32:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very good write, gave me chills. |
|
|
Re: A Visit from an Angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 06:13:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So sad but beautifully written. I'm so sorry for your loss.
I lost a set of twins years ago so I know what it feels like.
Hang tuff.
big luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
|
|
Re: A Visit from an Angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jess-tical on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 12:51:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was very deep...once i started reading it i couldnt stop...it really shows your emotions/feelings...a very ood write
...XoX...
|
|
|
Re: A Visit from an Angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 01:20:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I wanted you to know that this past December you sent me a message on here because of the poem I had written about my miscarriage...Thank you so very much for all of your encouragement! When I saw this poem I could help but think of my daughter. I will keep in touch wih you, and thank you so much again. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
