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What Became of Me ?
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 10:51:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In this haven, this four walled dwelling, I begin to dwell
Thoughts reach back, unlock rooms of the past
Running down the halls of memory, chasing time lapsed
Wandering through wondering, revisiting old ghosts
Where are you now my first sweetheart, naive love I gave eternally
Tentative first kiss forever preserved in capsule of thought
Once each needed each like the air that we breathe
Now everything but image lost, to strange subconscious sleep
Cast further back to purest days, those long hot summers of innocence
Tainted not by burdens or realities of life
Pacts laid down, a friendship bond so resolute and true
Life willed us on a different course, she spirited you away
The old school playground filled with voice, a mirror takes me there
Am I the one with the trusting eyes, are you the one with glowing smile
I sit for a moment, pondering, the faces I see and saw
Where once existence intertwined, now scattered seeds remain
Another day fades into dust and silence leads the night
I pray that those who are here and now will not melt into yesterday
In all the minds of these who are memories now, do I exist ?
The question I cannot ask or answer, what became of me ?
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Re: What Became of Me ?
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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Very beautiful write!
This time of year gets you every time..
Happy Holidays To You & Yours |
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Re: What Became of Me ?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 10:45:51 AM AEST
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Hello there friend,
I'm so far behind on my reading and commenting. Please forgive me.
Hey, We made it thru December,
Sad write but written like a professional.
Big huggs, Late, Happy, happy, holidays,
emy
sorry so late getting back to you so late. I'll try to do better. |
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Re: What Became of Me ?
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by MemeCaroline on
Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 10:16:46 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed your poem. Very passionate and thought provoking. |
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Re: What Became of Me ?
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by Aika on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 12:38:42 AM AEST
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Dear Sweetheart,
you are still you and will always be.
Your wonderful eyes, kind smiles
and loving heart.
Very lovely poetry you put in here...:)
And big sorries for the disconnection :(
With love forever,Aika |
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