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Dreams Can't Last Forever
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
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Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 06:48:47 AM in AEST
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oops
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Lying in a field of clovers
watching the clouds roll by
a warm breeze brings the smell of flowers
the sound of a babbling brooke fills the air
Making wishes on dandelions as I watch the sunset
reds and yellows fill the sky with beauty and perfection.
"I love you," you whisper to me
a single tear slides down my skin as I look into your eyes
Full of love and promises
I know I'll wake up soon
dreams cant last forever
The storm is rolling in.
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aloneinthememory
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2007-12-19 06:48:47]
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Re: Dreams Can't Last Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:39:01 AM AEST
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oohhh i definitely love this.
you have that 'fake perfection', so unreal it must be a dream. which is very poetic, very sweet, very...i like it.
and then the last line, completely makes the poem.
ohh, short and sweet and just beautiful.
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Re: Dreams Can't Last Forever
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by MemeCaroline on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 05:06:16 PM AEST
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