|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Darkest day
Contributed by
inad
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Lately my life has its ups and downs
I feel like im just going round and round.
I think about it every night
Even when we fight
I look at the knife or toy with the gun
you take it away, no fun.
You think you can tell me what to do where to go
Like im some ho
Why does my life have to be this way
Is it because I'm gay? or have no Say?
Sometimes I feel like im running out of words to say
and then you act like im in the way
I think every day and night
because i dont want to fight
or live this way
because im gay
I just want to die
or fly away into the heavenly sky
Copyright ©
inad
... [
2003-03-08 03:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Darkest day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gribba on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem... WOW....
it's like I was listening to my brother.
Not long ago he was saying this same thing, not in a poem but... ohhh...
wow...
This is a great poem and full with emotions!!
and it floads so well when reading it. |
|
|
Re: Darkest day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:47:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ummm... its very different... |
|
|
Re: Darkest day
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 09:57:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i think this is beautiful, i love how you laid it out too, huggs and love to you, always nessa
some sunny *smiles* too:) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
