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Immortal love [revived]
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 10:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I will love you every six seconds;
love you from now on…
I will love you forever;
love you,
long after I’m gone. ..
An Immortal love,
eternal grace…
I will never leave you;
watching over you,
from a distant place...
Feel my presence within the empty space.
My voice...
the call of the wind,
in the sunlight you’ll see my face.
I will love you every six seconds;
love you from now on…
I will love you forever;
love you,
long after I’m gone..
Copyright ©
Oceandreamer
... [
2007-12-16 10:06:33]
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Re: Immortal love [revived]
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 08:09:14 PM AEST
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A very fine tribute to your luv.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Immortal love [revived]
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th December 2007 @ 04:18:53 AM AEST
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Hey OD! How ya doing?
I find the first line so incredibly interesting. "every six seconds" ... just
too intriguing. You so often hear of someone saying, "I'll love you every minute of
every day" .. but to choose an increment of six seconds .. well, there's something
just poetic about that.
There is a beauty in this that is almost painful, (in the best way) and such a
complete absolution of endearment. Wonderful write.
~Breezy |
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