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The Fault
Contributed by
bluestars
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Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 08:32:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I never thought you'd be the kind,
that was just like, every other guy.
No one is here to blame
I never was playing any stupid game.
I thought you said you were above them all
and that you would never intentionally hurt me,
its like you where here to actually free me,
away from all these demons around here.
Now look at me,
pretending to be fine with it all
deep down inside it feels like,
you might have actually killed me.
A slap in the face
it seem like I cant escape,
from this tormented place.
I'll take the blame,
I'll take the fault
for believing in someone whom
I thought was the greatest
gift from them all.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2007-12-16 08:32:24]
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Re: The Fault
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 08:39:00 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written I find that the ones that make empty promises are the ones to run fromm.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Fault
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th December 2007 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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I am sorry you are feeling this way. It is so hard to move above
the emotion when your trust has been shattered and your soul
is in torment. Writing it out is a definite positive move.
You've created a picture of pain that is exacted on a heart
when it's been broken, (no matter the reason), perfectly.
Well done! Some things are truly too hard to put into words.
~Breezy
[just curious, but in the seventh line, did you mean "were"
when you said "where"? If so, one of the mods could correct
that for you. :) ] |
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