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A day with you
Contributed by
DAMIEN
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Woke up middle of the night,screaming out aloud,
never knew a single dream could turn my life around,
did'nt think,in this life,would find myself afraid,
laid back,thought of you,had all my fears allayed.
8'o'clock,still in bed,did'nt feel like getting up at all,
10'o'clock,was wide awake,having just got your call.
Afternoon,pinch myself hard,could'nt believe this was true,
there I was,sitting at a table,right in front of you,
Evening,sitting in you room,time just passed me by,
hated it,when finally,the time came for me to say goodbye.
Anyway,started back,felt like was going all way to mars,
but when I got back,did'nt forget,to thank all my lucky stars,
Now I'm back,lying on my bed,scratching my head in vain,
wondering,how long it will be,before this miracle happens again.
Copyright ©
DAMIEN
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2003-03-08 01:20:00]
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Re: A day with you
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 06:45:58 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem ... almost sounds like a song. I enjoyed it very much - sounds like you had a wonderful day! |
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Re: A day with you
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by Damien on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 05:00:28 PM AEST
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| As I said earlier that was one of the best days of my life and thanks for the encouragement-Damien |
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Re: A day with you
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:40:47 PM AEST
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| love this!! Its like I can hear you saying it :)...I agree..it does read like a song.nice one! |
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Re: A day with you
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by Ivy on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 05:21:20 AM AEST
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| nice write. |
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Re: A day with you
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:44:49 AM AEST
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| Its overwhelming, isn't it? Oh, what that spark of attraction,.. or new love can do! Your poem is great, Damien. Friend Bizzy |
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