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Jumping on the EMO Train (OMG I CUT MYSELF <3)
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skyhawk432
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Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 11:43:29 AM in AEST
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Re: Jumping on the EMO Train (OMG I CUT MYSELF <3)
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 12:58:29 PM AEST
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Um...i hope u can take critizism............this poem isnt really a poem its just words......they have no flow at all.......this doesnt even make sense......i take it you were just venting when you wrote this.......you really need to work on your style and use of words....make sure to have the words flow together this is just choppy....
well sry if i offended you in any way i just had to give my opinion on this poem
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Re: Jumping on the EMO Train (OMG I CUT MYSELF <3)
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by skyhawk432 on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:26:36 PM AEST
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I take it you don't understand satire.
Due to the forced centering, it makes this poem look choppy, but if you could care to elaborate on what you mean by that, I wouldn't mind. |
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