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Don't Dissemble My Heart
Contributed by
honey56
on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 01:49:27 PM in AEST
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I can only hide my face
Where no one would see
How you rain down on
Me.
My face is wet with rain..
My eyes are so sad
My heart is missing the time
Long ago..
It seem i'm walk around under
A cloudy sky,
Don’t dissemble my heart
Keep it all in one piece
Just trust this old heart of
Mine..
Give this old heart a chance
Just look into my heart
And see how many pieces
There will be to mend back
Again..
Um um um um um um um
My face is wet with rain
My eyes are so sad
Just trust this old heart of mine
Please don’t dissemble my
Heart...
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-12-14 13:49:27]
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Re: Don't Dissemble My Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ihop on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:48:47 AM AEST
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Hey,
I withdrew from this website forawwhile but I'm back and in action. Nice Write! I felt the flow of this poem. I made the significance of Love stronger for me. THanks. 5 out 0f 5
God Bless,
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Re: Don't Dissemble My Heart
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by ki on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:58:53 AM AEST
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hi there again honey !! love this!keep it up!
ki |
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Re: Don't Dissemble My Heart
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by little_genna on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 05:09:12 AM AEST
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| wow you put how ive felt some times about the guy i love in such nicer words than i ever do. my writes always end up having an angry under tone to me even when they are sad... i love this, hits every emotion just right.... |
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