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masochistic dreaming
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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into the darkness she screams
bellowing this sickness out with a yell
blood drips down the windowpane of life
porcelain face with blackened eyes and crimson lips
grimaces with internal sadness
she steps gently on the broken souls
collecting about her beaten boots
her black dress swirls in the blowing wind
tick tock tick tock
a clock chimes out of tune
in this forgotten place of pain and regret
plodding on, tears stream down her caked face
red hair plastered to her watery visage
fingernails of crystal dig into her arms
to awaken her from this hell of torture and destruction
she awakens
in her bed
from this dream
shaken and torn
she lays her weary head back on her pillow
her masochism begs her to return
to her dream of comfort...
for, this IS her comfort
some days...
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by roisin on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:58:35 AM AEST
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another excellent write....your dream images very vivid...did very much enjoy this read...
rosie |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by Gribba on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 02:48:23 AM AEST
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This is a Great poem... I felt like I was there!
The images are so alife! |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by venkat on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 12:38:15 AM AEST
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| very powerful action oriented images are presented in this .it is an excited read.dear Lady Dama, perchance you read my epic poem " Lady of Light" under inspirational topic I will be veary glad. I think for some time you did not write any poem. I felt your absence. Be cheerful and come up again with your talented writes. Good Luck..venkat |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by venkat on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 12:38:32 AM AEST
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| very powerful action oriented images are presented in this .it is an excited read.dear Lady Dama, perchance you read my epic poem " Lady of Light" under inspirational topic I will be veary glad. I think for some time you did not write any poem. I felt your absence. Be cheerful and come up again with your talented writes. Good Luck..venkat |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:26:04 PM AEST
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^_^ I like these 'thoughts' you have this was very vivid
'she steps gently on the broken souls
collecting about her beaten boots'
This was all filled with amazing imagery, but those 2 lines really caught my eye. Great poem!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 12:49:03 PM AEST
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Michele, When you put your mind to it you certainly don't mince words or imagery. This was very lurid........and true to it's title.
The coward in me didn't like it at all but the poet in me says that is a great piece of writing.
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by norm on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:00:36 PM AEST
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| got a lot of goodies |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:03:31 PM AEST
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| ah wow, first poem i've read by you and i loved it, am looking forward to reading more, alas must go now but hey ty for this one |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:43:36 PM AEST
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| a lovely dark piece, well done:) |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:50:25 PM AEST
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| ahhh...i love this...the beginning is very much like something i would write...beautiful... |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by ap on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:26:12 AM AEST
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the clamor of silence,
shatters the panes of my sleep,
dreamlessness breaks the continuance
of the reality in which closed eyes weep...
fanasical... dreamy... nightmarish... ah... better than reality...
ap |
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Re: masochistic dreaming
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:34:21 PM AEST
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| Very good. I really enjoyed reading this. Nice write. |
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