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like the wind
Contributed by
conorshawn
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Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Like the WIND
LIKE THE WIND
OUR LIVES ARE BLOWN.
Trees bare leaves
And branches quake.
The sun is bleak
The earth is cold and cruel.
Like products of our environments
We are empty of thoughts and ideas.
Like the wind
Our lives are blown.
As we reach out and see
Our souls, we are twigs
Among the ghastly winds.
Just like the winds
We are pages of the hourglass.
The wind will always blow
Just like our lives continue to grow.
Patrick
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conorshawn
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2007-12-13 16:10:05]
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Re: like the wind
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 07:35:18 PM AEST
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This is some heavy duty writing.
Very powerfull words.
good stuff.
huggs,
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Re: like the wind
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by tiggytom on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 10:23:55 AM AEST
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I agree with Emy, great work
I love the whole concept
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Re: like the wind
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 10:59:35 AM AEST
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This is power at its best. Lovely write. I loved how you went with the wind and tree's and nature..... It is easy to feel bare as a branch in the fall at times isn't it. Great writing indeed.
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