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Aqua Fire Pit

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 06:12:18 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Upon this mossy boulder I sit
Near the lake, an aqua fire pit

One day down with a lifetime to go
Will I make it without you I do not know

To never hear the delicate rhythm of your heart
Always having you catch me if I were to fall apart

A breeze rips upon my tear-stained face
Burning my eyes, my heart continues it's race

When your soft lips spoke to me a shattering farewell
Surprisingly I didn't sink to an instantaneous hell

For my mind created the illusion that you'd return
You didn't backwards glance, merely left me to burn

Sitting next to the sorrowful seas
I ponder on what was and could be

Whipping winds singing in tune to my song
A story of my life without you all was wrong

I can tell myself it's the first day of the rest of my life
Yet without you, possessing life seems all but right

Only living to sit on this lush mossy boulder
Next to the aqua fire pit, a a broken-hearted loner.

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2007-12-13 06:12:18]
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Re: Aqua Fire Pit (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 02:53:47 PM AEST
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Wow,
You just reach out there and grab the soul when you write.
Awesome.
hugg, smiles,
emy

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