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Night time
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 06:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How beautiful are the suns last rays? Another departure of this unprecidented day.
Night comes with its welcom embrace. Stars glide through the sky in all of their grace.
The moons light shines to the earth below. Its glorious with its yellow-tinted glow.
Now the night is slowly waving goodbye. The sun lights peeking out, ever so sly.
The sun shines again in all its beauty. Another day and night thoroughly drenched in glee.
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nirvana12
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2007-12-12 18:18:02]
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Re: Night time
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 02:55:28 AM AEST
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| Jesus Doesnt Wany Me For A Sunbeam-Were Do Bad Folks Go When They Die They Go To A Lake Of Fire And Fry-Welcom To My Nightmare Welcome To My Breakdown-Star F!@#kers Incorperated-Bark At The Moon Ha Ha Ha Ha-They Call Him Mellow Yellow-Goodby Cruel World Goodby-The Sinister Urge-You Look Wonderful Tonight-Im Only Happy When It Rains.I did a sentence by sentence I hope you and many enjoy from no notes headphones ect or radio your poem is picturectic Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: Night time
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by StephaniePaige on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 05:19:57 AM AEST
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| I absolutely loved this poem. It's so simple, and it still had my attention the whole time. I love the imagery you used. I love the whole feeling surrounding it. |
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