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You Don't Know
Contributed by
TooPhat
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Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 02:23:48 PM in AEST
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You don't know my pain
You don't know how I hurt
It feels like knives doing work
You will never understand
The pain I feel
Cause it hurts like a knife that is way to real
You haven't been through what I feel
So I don't expect you to understand
But when I feel both at the same time
I feel as if I could die.
The pain hurts, It hurts to walk, breath let alone move
So I know you think that's it a game
But the game is to real for me to fake the pain
I feel as if I could just lay here and die
I don't know how to cope but I do
I don't know how to feel but I do
This pain is as bad as it could ever be and that's real
For about 2 weeks I have been feeling not here
I wish I could end all this pain; agony and hurt
But till that day I just have to deal with it
And you would never know.
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TooPhat
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Re: You Don't Know
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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Oh they'll know
they just care
and if one day they decide to
it'll be too late
it's just the way it is.
why?
I don't know..
keep writing
always, abraham |
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Re: You Don't Know
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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Just know that you are not alone with these feelings that you are having. It seems to me that it is becoming the norm in society today in our teens. I hope that by writing and expressing your feelings help you deal with the troubles you are experiencing. Your expression of pain and hurt that you feel can be felt in the words you have expressed. Please keep on writing, may you once again feel the peace and joy deep within your one day soon. Try to remember that nothing last forever not even us humans.
Take care,
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