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Channel Surfing
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 08:36:36 AM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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It’s not like the tv shows
where families bond and promise grows;
Mother’s lie and turn away
Colours fade to shades of grey
So unlike the virtual land
where siblings form a merry band;
Father’s hit and families break
shame and fear left in their wake
All grown up we try to rate
with episodes of love and hate
but end up cancelled, running last,
doomed to re-enact our past
Parents rarely know what’s best,
sullen souls and scars attest
brother’s kick and sister’s tell,
but on tv, all is well.
Copyright ©
spike
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2007-12-11 08:36:36]
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Re: Channel Surfing
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 12:57:13 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
This is just beautiful!!
You are a brilliant poet!
Happy Holidays |
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Re: Channel Surfing
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 01:38:46 PM AEST
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it is? where?
I do not think its fair anywhere, but what do I know, Im a dumb female...single and not with anyone to compare......maybe Im wrong
Cute, and correct write.
Thanks Spike for the info
Endless |
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Re: Channel Surfing
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 10:13:46 PM AEST
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Lately on tv all I seem to see are infomercials...they are driving me mad.
Where is the Red Skelton Show and What happened to Ed Sullivan and all his entertainers...BeWitched...What happened to Tabetha...TV is total crap today.
The violence is good though..you can raise some healthy psycopaths watching that......I wish I had never bought a TV and invested in a well equiped library in the house when my kids were growing up.. |
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Re: Channel Surfing
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 10:27:09 PM AEST
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You are an incredible writer.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Channel Surfing
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by brew on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 01:23:32 PM AEST
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p like Leave it To Beaver..ha
could I say alot more and more and more
But hey, Wished it was like that
The write, take the heart, yet for more
brew~ |
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