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The wounded...
Contributed by
Gribba
on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wounded...
As the heart pounds
in their frighten chest,
the wounded, withdraw
into the darkness.
Hiding from the white beating hope,
that seeks them.
In the darkness the leaf's cry,
the tree's seem to grow, (tall and dark)
and the earth is about to die.
The wounded seek
shelter beneath the tree's,
the growing dark trees.
The crying leaf's
fall towards the ground...
The air grows even more silent...
Beneath a tall dark tree,
between the tears and the dying soil
lies one of the wounded
with a broken soul.
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Gribba
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2003-03-07 22:40:00]
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Re: The wounded...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 10:58:03 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Gribba.. This is a very lovely poem you have here... I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems...
Jenni |
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Re: The wounded...
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:04:51 AM AEST
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very many welcomes to this wonderful place... beautiful imagery... i can feel the pain of the wounded... especially the last stanza:
Beneath a tall dark tree,
between the tears and the dying soil
lies one of the wounded
with a broken soul.
excellent poem...
blessings... |
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Re: The wounded...
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by WordPoet on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:55:31 AM AEST
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Nice imagery. The setting and events seem to go hand in hand and lead a person from one line to the next.
Good write, keep it up.. |
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Re: The wounded...
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by Gribba on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 04:13:39 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your kind words it helps to not beeing afraid to post here... and makes me feel welcome...
Thank you all! |
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