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Momentary Existence
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 07:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Take this capsule of
Momentary existence
And shoot it into the air
Like a grandiose flair
In the hope to reach the one
That was never even there
And starve yourself on
The expectations
That you divvied up
For food for thought
Keep barking up the
same old knowledge tree
that has proven itself
so ineffectual before
and warp yourself up
in the roots that are fit
for a noose
swing like a monkey
from any old branch
and dance with the curiosity
of how it all went wrong
Copyright ©
xnoybis
... [
2007-12-09 19:01:26]
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Re: Momentary Existence
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 02:19:10 AM AEST
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wow. what a mind-bender. I am glad that I stumbled in here this morning, (have
been away for too long I fear). This is one of those pieces that just dares you
to swallow it, savouring each tender morsel to the extreme. How do we reflect?
What are our motivations for any given action or thought? There is a depth
here that could be scary for some, (if they care to dig deep enough within themselves
to find out.)
Exceptional work.
~Breezy |
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Re: Momentary Existence
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by evilcherry312 on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 07:20:41 AM AEST
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| hah, Breezy hit the nail on the head. This is a mind bender! It really does make you reach deep inside to see what you pull out. And that is scary for most people; they don't want to acknowledge what they know is inside of themselves. Great job! |
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