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None for All
Contributed by
Srinjid
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Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 06:20:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When will people learn,
That life is your choice,
There are few that know,
That raise their own voice.
When nobody frowns,
Nobody will fall,
For the contempt that gradually,
Consumes us all.
Hate is strong,
But not stronger than you,
What if we stand together,
This dream could come true.
The dream is you,
The dream is me,
This dream could be all of us,
That can set us free.
Nobody could stop it,
Its literally there,
Some of them say,
Why should we care?
Because nobody could match,
The standing of us here,
For we can all stop it,
Contempt, hate, and fear.
The gambling’s on
And the wheel has been spun
But this question remains
Is it none for all, or all for none?
Copyright ©
Srinjid
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2007-12-09 06:20:37]
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Re: None for All
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 06:51:15 AM AEST
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good message...overall it's alright.
but young poets (like myself) have a tendency to write like this - simply stating everything. and we don't take the time to edit.
i mean yeah, it's good - but go read some other ppl's writings, and it just blows me away everytime, when i think i write something good that took me no time at all.
so all i'm sayin - just don't brag about being able to write something in 10 minutes and your 15. b/c it's quality ppl look at. and i'm still kinda learning that.
- Bethani -
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Re: None for All
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 08:34:18 AM AEST
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Very nice write...
Happy Holidays |
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Re: None for All
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by Srinjid on
Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 12:59:16 PM AEST
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I'm not trying to brag about being 15 years old and making it in 10 minutes... I just posted that so i could avoid harsh reviews... Sorry for the wrong impression.
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