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Contrite
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 01:40:59 AM in AEST
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a free write: Contrite
I’m sorry, this time I went to far
I didn’t mean to hurt you… but I did and now I’m feeling so contrite
In the darkness, you took me after I hurt you so and made this plight
You took me by the hand and took me through this darkness into the light
Even though I hurt you, you made everything all right
In your caring, I felt my emotions ignite
For once I felt something, other than this cold, because something was alight
My heart felt something reunite, and though I brought pain, it felt as a burial site
It felt as if you were the queen of this light
I feel the pain I brought you then, and now I know, saying sorry is the only way to make it go
Now I feel I’ve lost my place, as you walk away, and I cannot see you in this darkness of night.
And now I feel sorry...
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2007-12-09 01:40:59]
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Re: Contrite
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 06:40:38 PM AEST
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Great writing, friend. I know how much it takes to admit ones faults and apologize. You should be very proud of this write.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Contrite
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by lost_again on
Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 09:36:20 AM AEST
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Sincere and from the heart. Nice write here.
LA |
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Re: Contrite
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 04:22:47 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome write! If only more people were able to admit it when they are wrong. Great Job!! |
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