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Did I Lose?
Contributed by
Night_Child
on
Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 09:50:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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We watched as it all flew away
It all flew away..
And under a starless November sky
I watched my Heart
Settle into the darkest ebony
We could have scaled mountains
But We Lost
We could have ridden wild horses
But I lost
Chill Winter Wind
Come
Dance with me at this Mystic hour
Turn my breath to shallow whispers
I changed course
On a ship set for Destiny
Oh vengeful Poseidon
Hear my prayer this night
I started with one man
And built an army
But now the fortress has begun to crumble
Soon
Only I will be left
In the ruins of my dreams
We could have sailed around the world
But We Lost
We could have stolen time under the pale moonlight
But I Lost..
I lost..
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Night_Child
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2007-12-08 09:50:19]
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Re: Did I Lose?
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 11:46:31 AM AEST
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You won a beautiful poem..I really enjoyed reading it..
Happy Holidays |
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Re: Did I Lose?
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by evilcherry312 on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 10:12:01 AM AEST
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| So emotional and very well written. I like how you chose which words to put emphasis on. Excellent. |
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