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Eyes of Turquoise Blue
Contributed by
yackerz85
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Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 01:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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These are the colors that conquer my dreams
Two priceless, rare, breathtaking stones
Those eyes of turquoise blue are my home.
Green so deep so understanding and true
Melds with blue so fair so loving and bold
These are the colors that conquer my dreams
I search a sea of eyes for your perfect pair
I can never find my treasure anywhere
Two priceless, rare, breathtaking stones
Alone and homeless, I seek my treasure
For never will I forsake my dreams
Those eyes of turquoise blue are my home.
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Re: Eyes of Turquoise Blue
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by damned_saint on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 02:11:14 PM AEST
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very very nice write... keep it up...
this is my fave stanza....
I search a sea of eyes for your perfect pair
I can never find my treasure anywhere
Two priceless, rare, breathtaking stones
hugs n' kisses
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Re: Eyes of Turquoise Blue
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 05:21:48 PM AEST
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You have a very rare talant. You know how to reach out and grab your reader and captivate them from your inner being. Many poets are trained to write but there are the rare ones like us that are just born with it.
Keep up the good work and always write free.
huggs, smiles, happy, happy holidays,
emy |
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