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Eyes Like Yours
Contributed by
minoo
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Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 09:51:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moment your eyes fervently meet mine:
Little shivers of delight, run up & down my spine:
I gaze & gaze …but little ponder:
Like a melancholic cloud I wander:
The very moment, I look into your charismatic eyes:
To you, submissively I feel like handing over
my soul, my passions & my desire:
Your dreamy, intoxicating eyes, in which I dream of living forever:
Forever till my very last breath:
Like an unforgettable melody, like an unforgettable sonnet:
What’s that in you, which steals away my every thing from me:
My soul, my passions, my desires & even my… Purity:
That once used to be the essence of my pride:
Don’t know how many people have gone astray only by looking once into your eyes;
You don’t seem to be cognizant of the dilapidation your eyes have caused:
Made so many acquaintances but could not find…
EYES LIKE YOURS…
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minoo
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2007-12-07 09:51:09]
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Re: Eyes Like Yours
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 10:31:24 AM AEST
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wow this is deep and beautifull.
huggs,
emy
What color were the eyes? |
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Re: Eyes Like Yours
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by yackerz85 on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 11:31:03 AM AEST
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This is absolutely gorgeous. Very well written and very very provoking. Personally, I think eyes are the most attractive feature about other people, but this poem brings it into a whole new level.
Happy holidays
~Mark~ |
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