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Truely Alone
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 03:52:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sweet red teardrops falling from the sky
Watching as she falls, waiting as she dies
He holds her tight, begging, pleading
She hears him call her name
As her vision blurs from the raindrops
Darkness takes hold of her body
Swallowing her into black despair
He cries for his lover, lost in emptiness
His hopes, his dreams, his entire world crashed around him
Blood like thick misery swirls around the two, mixing with the rain
He can’t believe she’s gone as he desperately tries to stop the liquid from spilling more
It’s too late, the wound too deep
All the love and hope in the world is vanished as his life ends before him
He feels his chest grow cold and his heart empty
So this is what it’s like to be truly alone
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desolantdreamer
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2007-12-07 03:52:25]
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Re: Truely Alone
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 05:15:32 AM AEST
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WOW!
This is deep..Grat read & Excellent work..
Happy Holidays |
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Re: Truely Alone
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 03:51:33 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. You have great talent, and you've shown in here.
Take care,
David |
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