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Stitches
Contributed by
yackerz85
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Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:24:14 PM in AEST
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Hand me the needle and thread
I’ve got some new wounds that need tending
Feel the sting as the cold steel turns red
I do it slowly to keep the pain from ending
Close up these cuts so poisonous and deep
Keep my heart beating despite my loss
Of anything desirable including sleep
Pierce, pull, pierce, pull, thread, and cross
And hand me the peroxide so I can pour
Pour the solvent of misery on my open wound
And hear my scream louder than before
A blood curdling scream correctly attuned
You’re truly the knife that tears me apart
Only stitches hold together my disfigured heart
Copyright ©
yackerz85
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2007-12-06 12:24:14]
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Re: Stitches
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by flamingblade on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:43:55 PM AEST
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A nice, twisted poem.
I think the images you use can almost make your reader feel the pain.
Very well written, Yackerz85. I can't wait to read more!
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Re: Stitches
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 02:54:10 PM AEST
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Wow!
The pain is deep..Excellent!
Happy Holidays |
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Re: Stitches
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by evilcherry312 on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 10:25:29 AM AEST
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| Made me feel the piercing pain of a broken heart, and of all those times that I felt exactly as what you describe. |
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