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Fading Memories
Contributed by
honey56
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Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My reflection in my mirror melting
In front of my face..
The blood running in my vain is
Cold..
Don’t leave me out here all along
I don’t want to just waste away
Into just memories
Sad filled with tears
But my reflection in my mirror is
Melting away..
The blood running in my vain is
Cold...
I lay back here watching the stars
Fading into distant..
Please don’t leave me here along with
Just the tears drown my soul,
Where did all my friends go?
Left here all along
Just melting into the darkness the
Darkness is cold..
Without a reflection to ease my
Loneliness,
The tears keep comin like the
Thunder of rain..
La la la la la.
Copyright ©
honey56
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2007-12-06 12:14:52]
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Re: Fading Memories
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by Crow on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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| such a sad write Honey" well done. merry christmas to you my friend...Vincent |
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Re: Fading Memories
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 03:20:54 PM AEST
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So sad is your poem and yet honest in it's
interpitation of each and evey emotion you
portray here. Beautiful work my friend . . .
Likewise, have a safe and warm holiday . . .
Ben |
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Re: Fading Memories
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by yackerz85 on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 11:02:35 AM AEST
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It is quite sad but nonetheless beautiful...
It makes me feel very empty inside...
I think thats what you were demonstrating through these very anguished words...
Nicely done...
~Mark~ |
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