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A Life worth living yet NOT
Contributed by
brownsugar8272
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Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 03:44:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A butterfly in my eyes
beauty at its finest
your ora outshined all the rest
so peaceful
so graceful
just so beautiful
Your eyes pierced many souls
they seemed to speak words your voice never told
Bed ridden but yet still desired livin
tubes and needles poked your frail body everywhere
but not a single complaint stirred through the air
humble even during such extruciating pain
I will never see such bravery ever again
May your eternal rest be more peaceful than your time spent here
but grandma I swear a part of me will forever be unhealed
In my memory you never left
and for now that will have to be my comfort I guess
there's a permanent tear that stains my heart
for a undeniable saddness keeps me falling apart
Lord your actions are always justified
still, this terrible ache swells my insides
Forever Missed
Leomie Melvina Turner. I love you Maw-Maw
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Re: A Life worth living yet NOT
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 09:31:52 AM AEST
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aww this is a very powerful sad write.. im sorry to hear about your loss but remember she is watching over you and will be with you always and always in your heart. this is a beautiful write.
rock on,
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Re: A Life worth living yet NOT
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 11:30:47 AM AEST
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| Very emotion very expresive comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: A Life worth living yet NOT
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 09:05:28 PM AEST
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rAW, DOWN TO eARTH, ABOVE THE WATER, straite thru the heArt write.
I'm so sorry for your loss, I know what this feels like too many times over.
Hang tuff and keep the faith.
luv, huggs, prayer, peace, joy,
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