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~parce que you~ xxx...
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
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ahhh, you're the poet in my heart
words within 'n without they dart,
ever, your ramblings and wandering
ever keeps my heart in love's spring,
between us our feelings ever flow
roots underneath begin to grow,
therefrom
become
so take me ever to that place,
embrace,
where
pair
share
flair
gently, o'er the little seedling, winds blew
upon our complimentary different hues,
ohhh, how is it, my soul, you know?
ahhh, wit
transmit,
sense
whence
everlong
love's song
seedling strong
~*~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-03-07 19:00:00]
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:05:25 PM AEST
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Was it on purpose that the picture the poems makes looks like to wine glasses joining into one? If so, I have never seen anything like that before....astounding...and if not...I think fate is speaking to you two.. :o) I stand in awe in either instance.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:09:05 PM AEST
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| That's two wine glasses..damn typos....lol |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 11:39:08 PM AEST
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Oh Vanessa a truly great poem as usual. Truly unique. Keep on writing it is truly a gift to read your poems :)
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:57:18 PM AEST
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| through the good and through the misunderstandings the involvement and the connection between us never ceases to amaze me, feck, that sounds serious, no chat for 24 hours babe, i'm low on endorphins, aaaaaahhh |
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by venkat on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:52:05 AM AEST
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| your wine cup is full of love, so alluring and enchanting, if a poet drinks from it sure that he will turn into a ghost of love and never goes to hell. all I can say you are in a wonderful mood. Its nice poem. thank you. venkat |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 04:38:07 PM AEST
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| this is truly an exquisite poem... i love it... blessings... |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 09:09:04 PM AEST
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| Nessa, to drink the words of the very ladyfawn, this is absolutely remarkable, hugs and love to you, Val |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:43:44 AM AEST
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| Beautiful,just beautiful! I loved this! Kolbrún |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by banjo on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:49:35 PM AEST
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What does the title mean?
You have a natural ear for meter. This flows nicely. But I hunger for a little more substance... if you go back to it, see if you can bring out the spring/seedling idea a little more clearly. It gets lost at times....
But a worthy effort. |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:48:33 PM AEST
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it is not a 'spring' seedling...it is something personal with the man i wrote it for; on my poems you would like me to rewrite, i ask that you rewrite them and mail them to me, with your changes, reasons and wherefores, as i am very happy with them and you have me somewhat lost in your thinking, ty, your writing friend nessa
p.s. *hint* the title is french |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by cyrano on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:45:30 PM AEST
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Love your style and voice in writing...fresh, individual and unique. (also intellectually stimulating)
Great job Nessa....Edward (Cyrano) |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by Opium on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:16:16 AM AEST
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| Parceque is a french word and it means "because" so the title is "because you..." |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by Opium on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:19:53 AM AEST
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| Parceque tu as choisis un titre français, alors je veux commenter en français de même ... c'est vraiment formidable, j'ais beacoup aimer cette pièce ...great write ;) |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:52:02 AM AEST
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| cher opium, j'aime que vous avez écrit ce commentaire me, en français, merci beaucoup, nessa d'étreintes |
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Re: ~parce que you~ xxx...
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:56:42 PM AEST
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Je ne vous suis pas rendu compte a parle le francais. Je suis le plus impressionne. Je pense que la langue francaise est s' incroyablement romantique. Maintenant je l'ai a pratiquer sur. Ceci etait un grand poem.
Au revoir pour le moment
Kie
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