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Venice
Contributed by
Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 09:28:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Palaces of pleasure stand like
Timeless birthday cakes parading,
Harlequins and histories,
In February masquerading,
Gargoyles decorating ridges,
Narrow ways and shallow bridges,
Liquid lanes in constant flow,
Strokes of Michelangelo,
This perfect Adriatic blue,
A dream I long to share with you,
Of gondolas and string quartets,
Thoughts of love we've not had yet
A rose, a hand, a glance, a kiss,
Love in Venice, love is bliss.
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Re: Venice
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by chatabox on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 09:56:54 PM AEST
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aww, you take us on a wonderful journey there Terry, full of colour, sets the senses reeling it does. Must be one of the most romantic places.........what girl wouldnt fall head over heels......in love I mean, not in the water!
lovely lovely images and beautiful words.
Hey just to be awkward........Venice is sinking...boo hoo. |
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Re: Venice
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by humphdj on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 12:02:44 AM AEST
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Venice wiil always be visible above the waterline with poetry such as this.
Wonderful.
Rgds
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Re: Venice
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by Patricia_Petro on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:09:23 AM AEST
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Hi Terry,
What a wonderful picture you paint here of Venice and romance. Sinking or not, it does make one long to be there. Very nicely done...as always.
~Patricia xx |
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Re: Venice
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by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:45:01 AM AEST
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Well now, how did you know I dream of going to Venice?? This is just beautiful and on this very warm evening you transported me there for a few minutes. It's a pleasure to read this Terry.
Love Chrissie xx |
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Re: Venice
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by Kassidi on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 09:32:56 AM AEST
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This was a wonderful journey. So vivid you could picture Venice right in front of you...thank you for that lovely experiance.
Kassidi |
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Re: Venice
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:22:41 PM AEST
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| What an absolutely perfect trip into a romantic setting to ease my troubled soul. This is beautiful in all forms and came at the right time to put a smile upon my face. Didn't even need to close my eyes to imagine the wonders kept within Venice. Thank you dear Terry...I needed this. Much love to you, Lia |
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Re: Venice
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 07:56:40 AM AEST
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Hi Terry,
This is a place I'd like to travel to one day. You've painted a picture that is very graphic.
Always,
Laurie |
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Re: Venice
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by Brooke on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 09:55:22 AM AEST
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This was such a lovely poem Terry. It too put pictures in my mind. Absolutely wonderful!
Brooke |
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