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I...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 11:15:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The days we spent together
Are just a fading memory
I know you used to love
But you no longer care for me
You didn’t care you hurt
You left without a thought
The hurt and pain you’ve caused
That wasn’t what you were taught
I hate the lies you told me
I hate the tears I cry
I hate myself for everything
I hate that I’m alive
I wish this pain would vanish
I wish my life would end
I wish I hadn’t believed in you
I wish that we were friends…
I miss you as I lay awake
I miss you as I sleep
I miss you when I take a breath
I miss you when I weep
I take it all the best I can
I take it against my will
I take too many drinks at night
I take too many pills
I take the hate you generate
I take your ******* wrath
But tonight to end it all
Ill take my toaster in my bath…
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Re: I...
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by meadcomposition on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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| I liked this until the end. It reminds me of something that could maybe be turned into a song..minus the end. But, it WAS good. And I actually know how you feel.. |
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Re: I...
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 12:49:22 PM AEST
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| Forever In My Secrete-I would like to comment it is a very powerful poem-Just a toast can be made-I Have Been Around For A Long Long Year Met Many Man And Fate-From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L.Jr. |
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Re: I...
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 02:08:28 PM AEST
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OMG Chris.......Dont ever do so...Not over anyone
Your a gifted person with a s soul...I dont know if you member me or not, But I havent forgot YOU!.......So you dont forget YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVER...................... This is so powerful and heart clinching.......its NOT worth it..........
HUGS
brew~ |
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Re: I...
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by ki on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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| This would make a great song..sad song,but a good song..nice job!! |
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