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What I think about you

Contributed by smilez101 on Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 05:34:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Ask me what do i think about you?

Your presence is like

a breath of fresh air

taking over me in the spring time

and if beauty had a scent


it would be named after you

but in reality I'm only suppose


see you on

cold winter nights

but if i could refrain

from exhaling

and still be able to live

it would mean that

your beauty would be a part of me

air is a feeling

and your words

send metaphysical

chills down my spine

i can't think

i cant sleep

you have become of me

in the morning

you are my waking thought

in the after noon

you are my

sitting in math class

looking out the window day dream

and at night you are my weakness

in fear to open my eyes

cause i know if i were to

turn onto this red light

it may never change back to green

If you ask me what I think about you,

If i could see you

know you

touch you

you would be love in the flesh




Copyright © smilez101 ... [ 2007-12-03 05:34:35]
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Re: What I think about you (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 06:52:47 AM AEST
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Sounds to good to be real for myself.but--Every Breath You Take Every Move You Make Evey Breath You Take Every Move You Make I Will Be Whatching(sp) You-unless your a visitor of The Grim Reaper and many live sounds like a coffin to not be ever able to feel.As in smells for me its like-Territoriol *****s-it is me and her smell is it.-Black And Blue And Broken Bones You Left Me Here All Alone My Little Piggy Needed Something New-From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr.


Re: What I think about you (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 08:11:25 AM AEST
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WOW, am blown away..Excellent poem


Re: What I think about you (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 01:36:04 AM AEST
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very well expressed!good write!




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