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We All Fear It.
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Sunday, 2nd December 2007 @ 10:28:08 PM in AEST
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The nature of a spirit
So easily strong
So easily gone
We don't want to hear it
The Death knell
The dispel
We all fear it.
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2007-12-02 22:28:08]
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Re: We All Fear It.
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by enigma on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 02:19:03 AM AEST
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Xnoybis,
...fear is so much a part of our present existence. Looking back on human history, as Knowledge increased, fears decreased; superstition gives way to understanding. As full of fear as our lives today are, our fears are fewer than our historical counterparts.
I love how you distilled the whole fear concept to its least common denominators; minimalistic. Very good. All the reader has to do is add a bit of him or herself, and the whole concept expands, bigger than life! Nice job! I've gotten too wordy in my recent years. I tend to bury the topic in verbosity.
Your poem is much appreciated.
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Re: We All Fear It.
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by Zaf_Stud on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 04:53:59 AM AEST
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Good little write!
Few words yet deep thought.
Thought of fear, a shadow walking with everyone.
Keep writing.
Zaf_Stud. |
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Re: We All Fear It.
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 10:32:03 AM AEST
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Excellent post..Yes, know one wants death to creep into their room..We want to go to heaven but no one want to die to get there..
Happy Holidays.. |
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