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An Unfinished Poem
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Sunday, 2nd December 2007 @ 04:12:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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(In respect Of Laura Horner whom I love and respect from the core of heart)
The only song that is attributed to you,
And the words that create your images,
Enchant me.
The only colour,
That you opt to be clad in, on a certain day,
Enthralls me.
Only those scenes,
Which your eyes have cast a gaze upon;
Captivate my eyes.
Only the flowers,
That beam because of you,
And steal scent of your lips,
Fascinate my eyes.
If you smile, smile the ages;
These stars, moon and skies,
Flowers, colours and seasons,
Fragrance, and the throbbing heart,
And all sights sway in rapture,
Because of you.
My words too,
Formed in verses begin to flow,
In numbers, because of you.
Oh! My beloved: my life, my soul,
How long I should praise you,
For I confess, I am too deficient to reckon,
Your sweet dimensions,
In words and in images,
In metaphors and similes.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
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2007-12-02 04:12:17]
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Re: An Unfinished Poem
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 2nd December 2007 @ 06:01:47 AM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. very lovely. very deep and heartfelt.. awesome write..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: An Unfinished Poem
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 02:17:38 PM AEST
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I feel I don't deserve these beautiful words you have penned my dear friend. That we live on separate continents, and we travel different paths, obviously has no bearing on your heart. I do appreciate your thoughts and words.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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