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ACCEPTEZ - MOI
Contributed by
drmpb
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 11:10:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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ACCEPTEZ - MOI
by Dr. Mahendra Bhatnagar
Tr. Mrs. Purnima Ray
Mes désirs :
Comme les étoiles scintillantes
Au sein du ciel!
Mes passions :
Comme les ruisseaux brillants
De la rivière 'Bhagirathi' coulante en vitesse
Qui lève des Himalayas!
Mes sentiments :
Comme les guirlandes les plus belles
En roses rouges
Fraîches, parfumées et fleuries!
Je vous les offre
Avec de l'adoration;
Ô la Beauté céleste!
Chaque petit coin de mon coeur
Est rempli
De vos rayons dorés et beaux!
Acceptez - moi,
Ô, acceptez - moi
Même dans ma vie d'existence terrestre
Je vous offre mon amour le plus chaste!
E-Mail : drmahendrabh@rediffmail.com
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Re: ACCEPTEZ - MOI
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cupid on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 09:16:30 AM AEST (User
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J'adore cette poeme! C'est tres belle!
Bon travail, drmpb!
Je l'aime beaucoup!
(Je parle francais [un peu] aussi. J'apprends plus a l'universite)
Restez ecrire, mon ami!
(Corrigez-moi si Je l'ai incorrecte dans ma grammaire)
Salut! |
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Re: ACCEPTEZ - MOI
(User Rating: 1 ) by jantra on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST (User
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well i usually hate it when people leave comments that just say "nice write" i usually try to leave comments and suggestions for people who could really use it but in your case all i can say is this is truely beautiful. what a pleasure it has been to read your work. you are a true talent |
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