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Her Star-Lit Eyes
Contributed by
ftmfan
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 02:33:03 PM in AEST
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I can see the world in her starlit eyes, Oh what beautiful eyes,
I see me the way i wish i saw myself, Oh what beautiful eyes,
I see what drove Poe mad, what he never could forget,
I see what Shakespeare saw when he imagined Juliet,
I see what i fear I'll never have, in those, her beautiful eyes,
I see what i never want to lose, Oh what beautiful eyes.
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Re: Her Star-Lit Eyes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 03:39:05 PM AEST
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Short and sweet.
Welcome.
huggs,
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Re: Her Star-Lit Eyes
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by ki on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 01:48:45 AM AEST
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Congratulations on ur 1st poem..I liked it..sounds like a sweet girl you got there!
Ki
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Re: Her Star-Lit Eyes
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by JohnYamrus on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 07:16:26 AM AEST
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for a first effort this is quite good. it's intelligently written...and not filled with hokey crap. you've tried to say something new about something very old.
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