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You Fall
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 10:47:10 AM in AEST
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It trips you and you fall
A harsh smack
You lose it all.
By the time they hear your yelp
It's too late, you're beyond help.
You lay in a morgue, stone cold
Your mother won't even look at you,
That'd be too bold.
Closed casket, a rip in your head.
They lay you down, a wooden bed.
All alone, you wish to fly
Hoping God will hear you cry.
Left to rot, you've lost it all,
At Death's command, you fall.
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flamingblade
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2007-11-29 10:47:10]
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Re: You Fall
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 01:06:51 PM AEST
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kinda twisted
I think your teacher would send you to the guidance office but other than that it's pretty good |
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Re: You Fall
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 02:41:11 PM AEST
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| excellent |
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Re: You Fall
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 03:18:53 PM AEST
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| nice write. don't quiet know what the story behind it is..but still a nice write. |
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