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Why!?!?
Contributed by
glitch
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 03:30:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why must I be the one sitting here watching you people pass by me like I'm not even there?!?!
Sitting here just makes me hate you! MY OWN KIND!! wretched beings of this wretched place we call home! No longer am I classified as human! no more pain, no more suffering I am through with all of this, all I want is the one I love back in my arms but, I guess that is too much to ask because I am cold and alone in this place......why?...why am I tormented so? by the very people that are all around me..........the answer to this question I am not granted acess to, denied by God who is such a being that he himself must keep me from prying it from his clutches....perhaps because for me to know it would not be a good thing. so here I sit in this pathetic wheelchair lost and alone......waiting for it to come back....if it ever will......
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2007-11-29 03:30:31]
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Re: Why!?!?
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by JohnYamrus on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 04:25:03 AM AEST
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i was fully prepared not to like this thinking it was some goofy Goth mad at the world poem only to find myself surprised to see it's a wheelchair rider mad at the world poem. i could never picture myself in your situation and don't even know how i would react, so i'm not going to say something stupid like chin up. i can only comment on your poem from a purely literary viewpoint and with that in mind i have to say "good job".
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Re: Why!?!?
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 05:37:16 AM AEST
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| Everything has its time and so will you, prepare for the rain and it will come. |
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