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A Fence
Contributed by
Rescue
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 01:16:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The fence is covered
It’s rule under constant siege
By rebellious vines
Copyright ©
Rescue
... [
2007-11-29 01:16:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Fence
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 01:07:25 AM AEST (User
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Excellent haiku! You used the correct syllables in each line; 5/7/5. I picture this as an old country fence...maybe because I live in the country and well, I have a few fences that fall under siege come Summer time.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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