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My Life
Contributed by
emmybuglove
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Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 01:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Since the moment I was concieved,
lots of love I recieved.
I grew up in a little home,
so I was never alone.
I have a brother, a sister, and friends,
I hope this feeling never ends.
All this happiness you can see,
but who would know that it could happen to me.
It was a night of wild thrills,
their were people with alcohol and pills.
How could I have known one was in my drink,
I just drank I didn't think.
Moments after I knew something wasn't right,
their was a dizziness I couldn't fight.
What was wrong with me I couldn't tell,
one drink and I felt like hell.
Stumbling down a hall for help,
I was suddenly shoved and I gave a yelp.
Two pairs of arms so strong,
my conciousness slipping, it wouldn't be long.
Trying stuggle with all my might,
I was struck for trying to fight.
Next thing I know I was alone and awake,
remebering it now I begin to shake.
They took it from me and I'll never get it back,
the times I cried I couldn't keep track.
These men showed me the ultamite disrespect,
it was then I began to reflect.
Instead of wallowing in my own self pity,
I'm going to change this world by leaving this city.
Human Kind was given a life,
and yet we create disasters full of strife.
I'm going to help those in need,
I'm going to clothe love and feed.
This disaster that happened to me,
is kind of a blessing you can't really see.
It gave me the motivation to care,
and of how to give to those out their.
I will not let this stop me from living,
and it won't stop me from ever loving
...my life
Copyright ©
emmybuglove
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2007-11-27 13:34:59]
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Re: My Life
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by johnnywords on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 03:42:39 PM AEST
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| It is so sad that you were hurt as you were. There is a lot of feeling in your poem. Well done. |
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Re: My Life
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 03:46:06 PM AEST
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YOU'RE WHAT I CALL-AMAZING! YOU TOOK THIS HORRIBLE TRAGEDY,STRONG & TRUE TO REACH OUT TO OTHERS & TRY TO COMFORT & HELP - IT ONLY HAS TO PROVE... YOU'VE GOT THE STRENGTH TO OVERCOME & DEFEAT YOUR DEMONS,I
WISH THE REST OF THE WORLD WAS LIKE THIS-THEN THERE WOULD BE NO WARS,
ONLY LOVE TO FOREVER LAST FURTHER MORE!
DAN! |
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Re: My Life
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 06:04:04 PM AEST
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You've done a great job with this write and tragedy.
When you use your life to help others you take away the power of the one that violated you.
You should be really proud of yourself.
huggs, luv, prayers,
emy |
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Re: My Life
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 12:42:49 AM AEST
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It is something no woman should have to endure , yet so many are forced to.
I wrote a poem on the same subject, called More Than Just a Crime, because it is !!
I'm glad that somehow you are finding the strength to cope with it
Steve |
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Re: My Life
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by Rescue on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 05:34:09 AM AEST
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A very powerful writing. It actually gave me chills!
There's no doubt in my mind that you're a very strong young woman who has not lost her heart even through such a violation.
I feel that your poem has the power to change lives.
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Re: My Life
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by emmybuglove on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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wow i didnt think so many people have commented already i'm shocked
thank you everyone for the comments it means a lot to me: ) |
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