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A Cloud Choked Lullaby
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 07:58:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pieces of my besotted dreams fall from the sky.
Bit by bit, the ill-fitting jigsaw puzzle
floats down like a torrent
of men with utterly unreliable parachutes.
They hit the ground
in a smattering of excuses.
An agitated airplane engine rumbles impatiently in the distance.
Flustered mechanics with bad weather signs,
so clearly and sorely behind time.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
... [
2007-11-26 19:58:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Cloud Choked Lullaby
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 08:33:04 PM AEST (User
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Seems like every word was careful thought of to fit exactly into place in this.
I'm msytified that so many people seem to have missed this, but perhaps that's often the case.
Good things have a habit of going unnoticed.
Will read more soon
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