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I'll Show You
Contributed by
Shadows_In_The_Darkness
on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 06:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Let me bring you down into the dark depths of my soul,
I値l show you what it痴 like when you lose all control.
I値l show you what the edge of this blade does for me,
I値l show you what it takes for me to feel free.
Quickly slide down with me on this spiral to hell,
I値l show you just how this angel fell.
Pain and hatred turned these wings from silver to black,
I値l show you the point where I couldn稚 turn back.
It wasn稚 long ago that I crawled into this bong,
I値l show you how it feels to never belong.
Stuck in my prison of total darkness,
I値l show you my loneliness.
Everyday I walk around with this plastic grin,
I値l show you there痴 no release like sin.
Maybe I知 just too far lost to even be saved,
I値l show you someone disgustingly depraved.
You see, when the pain is too much, I have this devise;
I値l show you how it stops with just the first little slice.
I値l just drag this blade across each of my wrists,
I値l show you my scars where the pain persists.
A dark and gruesome release into ecstasy,
I値l show you how death became my fantasy.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Shadows_In_The_Darkness
... [
2007-11-26 18:36:27]
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Re: I'll Show You
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by MemeCaroline on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 07:18:02 PM AEST
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| You are very talented, but I feel so very sad for you. I hope you can make it out of this prison of pain you seem to be in. |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by ki on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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| Hi.i don't know you.or your personal situation.But i know pain so bad it makes you want to not be on the earth.Whatever it is that your going thru, Please don't let it take you away.This poem is so sad, but its written beautifully.Continue to express yourself, and please continue to live.good luck to you. |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 04:09:55 AM AEST
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Such sadness and raw pain come across in this poem. I felt compelled to comment, as I myself have felt/feel this way sometimes, as the prvious poster said, I hope that you can find your way back to the light , great write, well put together!
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Pix xx |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:23:59 AM AEST
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The thing is... we were never "angels". We were never in the Light; we were only in a protected sphere to begin with. Now, though, the sphere melts away. And we have to search for the Light. Get up and get after it. It's not easy; energy itself is one of the hardest things to conjure up. but is it really harder than suffering?
Andrew |
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