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i woudnt guess if i was down

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 03:30:31 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

now we bring the first comment to the group an easy one to start
A role play if you will all trying to all a series with no part
The human game this is the play the show won’t cancel so on this will stay
Again let’s try for honest gain no stab in the backs republics you gain
We are calling all sides the grey and the blue this is the tide some will capsize when we are threw
Slow down let’s just follow our grips death is a disease a cure will then follow
No age lines in cosmetics we fall while they wallow
Simple distractions for all who are mass
Signs and door stops a rump in the donkey
My lines are not following simple logic they are signalling wrong
This isn’t my hope the stories all wrong
Sinister characters no plot only ploy
Actors in real mans clothes harvesting the yolk
Buying your vote’s bible they tote
Again off rails this seal is not for the race
Against all odds I hope a true man takes the place
But believe all we want the truth isn’t real
Like a skipping record or the words in this pose
Nothing makes sense only towers they fold
Let’s see if I can make sense of this so called opinion
Sense of belonging is only the beginning
Take hold of shape and the forms we create only with time our lines will show beliefs
Harvesting bad is a bad time call to burn these crops
Just don’t tell the fuzz what you sought
Dance and swirl pivot and flail
Time to make sense out of the wheel
i am sad deep inside i heap threw the dead
Collecting tears the the leaving can’t spare
Bottled and capped to sell to the mass
Glory to most and the rest turn to ash
Slowly this span will be defined all the drugs
Probing the brain and the anger we lug
I see this rise is fallen by me
Time to go time to be free

Copyright Â© lostrelic ... [ 2007-11-26 15:30:31]
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