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THE BRUTAL TRUTH
Contributed by
soulsearching43
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Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 09:45:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I covered the bruises and hid the pain
Somehow you made me feel the shame
It took a long time for me to see
That you would never be the man I needed you to be.
You tried to keep me with promises and lies and swore to love me to the day you died
But you lied again just to see
If there was anyway you could still win me
Foolishly I returned believing the lie
After all for you I was willing to die
Patiently I waited for your promises to come true
But all i got for my trust was more black and blue
After twenty years of of lie’s and pain
To stay with you would be insane
I’ve accepted its over and it’s time to move on
I think its something we can both agree on
I know i deserve a life free of pain
Not one that fills me with such disdain
Its time for us both to face reality
We just don’t work there’s been to much brutality
dawn
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2007-11-26 09:45:11]
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Re: THE BRUTAL TRUTH
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 09:52:04 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece of work..But sorry you had to susbtain so much abuse..
Happy Holidays & God Bless!
Excellent write thou!
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Re: THE BRUTAL TRUTH
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 10:02:22 AM AEST
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Run, don't walk away from this person.
Very sad but good writing.
I hope and pray your life changes for the better real soon.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: THE BRUTAL TRUTH
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by Shadows_In_The_Darkness on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 06:53:15 PM AEST
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| I'm a survivor myself and have been out since April 2006. I understand the pain and the back and forth, it's very hard, but I hope that ur out! Trust me, I know how you feel, it's scary. If you haven't left yet, then leave babe! Make the plans and go, there are a lot of places out there to help u get urself set up somewhere where he will never find u! So if u haven't yet, then go. It only gets worse....Best of luck |
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