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Ghosts
Contributed by
Rescue
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Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 11:39:12 AM in AEST
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Chased by memories of the past
On several streets and different sites
Horrible plays by my ghostly cast
Why do they rise against me now?
A dark reminder of years in sorrow,
Wounds thought healed, now reopen
As my ghosts persistently follow
How can I escape their pursuit?
Time didn’t heal, but stung like a lash
Acts on the stage of one’s mind
A decade of misery, here in a flash
What do they want from me?
So, I isolate myself in full retreat
Wanting not to see those I knew
Afraid of old friends I may meet,
Won’t these ghosts leave me in peace?
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Rescue
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Re: Ghosts
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 03:35:33 PM AEST
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| Regrets of past experiences and mistakes seem to haunt us for eternity. Hopefully you will be able to put these at rest in a reasonable amount of time, for eternity seems a little long. Excellent write! |
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Re: Ghosts
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by brew on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 08:41:54 AM AEST
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Sometimes, facings the past of ghosts, help get throught the present and future......easier this way. Not always a bad thing, will help journey to a new path...hopefully. Well written write. Keep posting
brew~ aka dayna |
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Re: Ghosts
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 03:07:15 PM AEST
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Good write. I think many of us can relate to certain ghosts that can haunt and taunt. You've captured the feeling and the fear well.
Peace,
Laura |
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