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The Night's Beat
Contributed by
honey56
on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 09:42:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The night approaches as
The lights dims
The night is rocking while
The music is stomping,
The noise thicken as mini
Skirts are shaking..
Everyone hands are clapping
As their feet began to slide
A cross the floor,
Moving with the beat
Heads bouncing,
As the music stomping,
Knees are cracking,
Hips are moving from side
To side,
While moving with the beat,
The music is electrifying while
The night keep on rocking with
The beat.
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-11-25 09:42:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Night's Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 10:52:54 AM AEST (User
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Sounds like where i was thanksgiving minus the jack daniels lol. i love your poetry, vivid and ambiguious, your a splendid writter . . .
likewise a warm and safe holiday 2u2, take care my friend . . .
Ben
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myheartsvoice |
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